Initially, I was able to identify a public issue that is of interest which is the uncontrollable and non-structural bushfires in Australia. Through my writing I have been able to improve on my argument on the paper. I have persuaded the reader to agree with my opinion and facts on Australian Fires. The paper has main points that can be argued thus avoiding a mere information dump. I have been able to support my stand on the issue of Australian fires and offer facts that are related to the issue. Additionally, I have improved on my research on the issue through relying on several articles and journals. These have played an important role in ensuring that my arguments are linked to evidence and support from journals and articles that offer information related to Australia bushfires.
I need a lot of improvement when it comes to arranging of points to ensure that the paper presents a solid and convincing evidence that supports my stance. I have realized that the paper lacks some continued follow from introducing the issue since the paragraphs are not arranged systematically. I also need to ensure that each paragraph has a new argument to improve the structure of the paper. I also need to create an outline to convey the message easily on the paper. The easiest way to narrow down a topic is to create a basic outline that will build a proper argument before writing. While writing the paper I realized that there is need to improve on my understanding of the argument in order to critically analyze the evidence.
Am planning to invest more time in researching to ensure that I have adequate information that will support my opinions. I have created an outline for the paper and ensure that each paragraph starts with a new argument to ensure follow and good structure of the paper. I have also paid attention on simple grammar and critical analysis of arguments.